*The Pointless Writer*

has a life you're completely uninterested in. But it's okay because I can write. No abbreviations. No shoddy grammar (though I'm not immune to mistakes). Just quality writing on sometimes completely pointless topics.

Inspiration/ Hilarity

`cirque. (by Nick)
The Joel Stein
Hyperbole and a Half (by Allie Brosh)

Pointless Yakking

No chatbox.

UnPoints of Note

1. I write when fancy takes. Sometimes, fancy takes many months of leave.
2. Never give up on this blog. I will eventually come back. When fancy has returned from its unfaithful travels.
3. All posts labelled Randomosity were written while I was on my junior college's blog team.
4. Everything is written as a challenge to myself. And it's all in good fun. Cheerio!

Snapshots of Society: Train Rides
Wednesday, May 22, 2013

She sits, the perfect picture of this generation. Her eyebrows are furrowed slightly, her gaze cast upon a small rectangular screen I cannot see. What is so intriguing about this tiny oblong creature, whose back is red outlined in grey? A cherry red that lacks sufficient brightness to be named thus, the product of this generation with its artificial processes of colour and material creation. A matte red too bright to be named thus also, decorated with an insignia I never get to see clearly. A crest? White with a horse, shadowed by the angle at which she holds this precious pet, enabling her to admire with reverence its visage. Though why she worships it so I do not know since it only causes her to frown.

Her neck straightens, bringing her head closer to parallel with the dark window behind her, darkened by the murky tunnel the train passes into. The tiny muscles above artificially outlined eyebrows relax, releasing an everyday face from an everyday frown. Anew, the muscles resume their work, clenching slightly, mildly enough that they do not draw attention to themselves but to the sterner, slightly worried set of their painting - dark lines which now protrude slightly off the canvas of her face. Her head bows accordingly, increasingly lowered with the device in her hands as the invisible on-goings of her rectangular little world furrow her her brows more and more.

She fidgets every so often, tilting her head in various directions, far enough that it looks to put an uncomfortable strain on her neck and spine but not so far as to cause immediately noticeable discomfort when her attention is diverted from the well being of her body to the device. Her fingers wrap and unwrap around her device, sometimes possessively clutching it in two hands, sometimes only in one. Her right hand never leaves contact with the matte cherry red. The oblong acts as a mobile stage, pivoting forward and back as her fingers adjust themselves, breaking out of each plateau to dance their next step. Her index finger now wrapped gently about the grey edge, now elegantly outstretched with only the padding of her fingertip against the furry-coloured grey that is actually smooth rubber.

The persistent movement, small though it is, renders her hard to sketch as shadows dance across the entire portrait.


Two friends, so similar yet so different. Friends? Perhaps they aren't. Both attired in dark jeans and black tees. Perhaps they are merely acquaintances, travelling companions, moving to or from some event they are both involved in. Probably the former, as we travel toward the city centre. But I could be wrong.

No matter the event. Perhaps they are friends regardless. Similar taste in hair: two heads of rich dark copper brown hair, artificially coloured with man-made chemicals. A fashionable colour in some circles. Newly coloured, lacking the initial sprouting of black that betrays the hair colour we are born with and the time of our last colour job. Both clutch phones.

But so very different in their approaches to life. One ceases staring at his phone only to complain loudly and vulgarly (vulgar in manner though not in language) to the other. I do not bother listening to his complaints, which sound inconsequential, as so often happens when one is unpleasant about things. His upper lip twitches, revealing his teeth. There is something incredibly feral and coarse about such an action, small as it is. But rather than make him look predatory as it would a lion or defensive as it would a dog, it combines with other fine muscular movements on his face - a twitch of his upper cheek muscle changing the contour of his eye, the tugging down of his lower lip asymmetrically, the pulling of his jaw muscles - to form a smirk. A smirk that betrays overtones and undertones of his character and his view of the world. How people mistreat him and people are ridiculous and he is superior in his unstupidity.

The other, friend or no, is silent. His eyes a little vacant. Bored. His chin is slenderer, the product of a gently sloping jaw, a contrast to the hard angles of the first's jaw made harder by their tense set. His lips neither upturned nor down-turned. He listens silently to the first's complaint, if he listens at all, offering no sympathy or disagreement. Almost a statue carved from flesh. No thoughts can be seen on his face at all. No character defining or revealing muscular twitches. His eyes are glazed as he continues watching his screen noncommittally. The mystery of this mid- to late-adolescent is solved when he closes his eyes and goes to sleep.

The first remains awake, turned away from the second as if in a sulk that he does not agree emphatically about whatever he has just complained about, typing angrily with an almost vicious pleasure into his phone.


A mother and her son. Perfect picture of attentiveness, for a split second anyway. The son's face turned up towards the mother, glowing where the sun gently flows, in shadow where his nose forms a natural screen from the light. Just enough light to make an angel, and just enough dark to make a secret. The mother's left arm up on the edge of the seat (where chair meets train window, clear and forever changing as the landscapes shift) and her other hand in her lap, her whole spine curved away from her child to bring her face closer to him - her hair falls, framing her face, blocking her face, as she whispers a secret love.

In actuality, she is trying to get him to repeat a certain word, but he is a spirited, lively child and spews a string of other words instead.

They lose each other's attention. The boy, having finished reciting his alphabet hastily with his mother's prompting, turns. Now his behind faces us, in a swift pivot only children are skilled at with their young bones and smallness in an adult-sized world. Torso straight up from his knees as he watches the quickly passing world outside, his calves forming an imperfect right angle with the rest of himself, tapering off into little feet that don't quite make it to hanging off his seat. His younger sister (or brother?) to his other side, seated docilely in a helper's lap, bores of her docility and reaches over to touch the soles of her brother's shoes, now upturned.

The mother, who seems inattentive as she stares at her mobile phone, eyebrows slightly furrowed, instantly reaches out with a hushed exclamation of higher middle range. High enough to express surprise and low enough not to disturb other passengers. She wraps her hand around her daughter's hand, wiping off dirt (ineffectively). The boy turns from his world gazing, "What?" Always eager for new action, new stories, new worlds. The situation is explained to him and his body completes its pivot, swiftly swinging his behind back onto the seat. He touches his sister affectionately, left hand gently prodding her at an indiscriminate spot whilst his right leg remains folded onto his seat, betraying his desire to pivot back and watch the outside world, contradicting his left leg, which hangs almost limply off his seat to facilitate his contact with his sister.

The boy bores of his non-verbal sister and turns to get his mother's attention. As before, she seems inattentive, her eyes glued to a tiny screen, but the oblique angle her torso makes with her seat shows otherwise. Though she occupies herself with a digital barrage of information, her femininely crossed legs point her feet towards her children as comfortably as they can whilst her back seeks no comfort in the chair, instead facing another passenger, all so she can watch her children out of the corner of her eye. Her son's hand lands on her arm, but already his eyes are elsewhere! Such scarce attention is found in the young. She rebuffs him softly, gently. "Later"? I can't quite catch her words. He doesn't fuss, dropping his hand to her lap to maintain contact and allow his eyes to drift further. His lips are parted slightly, smooth and shiny puckers of pink-skinned flesh. A little cherub.

And he is a cherub indeed! As close to one as you will find in a real child. Attentive and yet dreamy, affectionate, well-behaved. A true angel for one gets to enjoy the spunk and willfulness of a young child - the way he doesn't sit in his seat the way he's supposed to - without being over-frustrated because he doesn't resist extravagantly - no screaming for attention. And perhaps this is simply because his mother provides sufficient attention, despite the picture of distraction the phone in her right hand provides. He knows she will listen to him when it is important, as we can infer from the quick response to the dirtying of her daughter's hand no matter the otherworld she gazes at.

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